Itโs time for my second round of SFINCS 2 reviews, but first a recap my introduction from last week. Iโm part of Team Booked Solid, but what Iโm sharing here represents only my own opinions. My thoughts may very well differ from those of the rest of my team.
I originally had the ambition of reading all of my teamโs assigned books, but unfortunately, life got in the way, and while thereโs still time, I must confess I wonโt be able to get through all twenty (Iโm only halfway so far). Not to worry, though, weโre a team, and each book in our batch will be read by at least two judges.
Adding to that, I decided to focus on identifying books I wanted to see in the semi-finals. This means that if I feel a book isnโt good enough to qualify, and if I donโt enjoy it, I wonโt finish it. Iโm very much a mood reader, and forcing myself to finish a book thatโs not for me usually ends up with me disliking it even more.
This doesnโt mean that all books I review are potential semi-finalists, but it does mean theyโre worth reading. So, without further ado, hereโs my second batch of reviews:
Once We Flew
By Nikky Lee
This science fiction novella tells the story of an aging woman, Marsa, trying to fulfil her best friendโs dying wish. Only, itโs not so much a wish as a vision, or maybe a prophecy. If Marsa can find what she saw in her friendโs memories before she passed, it may save her small village from extinction.
A generation ago, a space ship full of settlers crashed on an inhospitable desert planet. Thousands died, but some survived and started eking out a living in the harsh climate. The village lives on, but time is running out, and strange afflictions affect the villagers.
Itโs that affliction which allowed Marsa to see her friendโs memories, and itโs what allowed the friend to see visions of the future, and possible salvation.
What I didnโt Like
The scope of the story is just slightly too big, and I feel like it might have worked better as a full length novella. Thereโs a little too much going on, and while the situation is definitely serious, I didnโt quite feel the gravity of it.
What I Liked
The ideas. The setting is built around a number of interesting ideas, that I wonโt go into detail about. Itโs another reason I think this ought to have been a novel. Thereโs just that much to explore.
I also liked that we get a story told from an older womanโs perspective. The exact age isnโt clear, but from the way sheโs treated by other characters, and herself, sheโs probably at least upper middle-age. Not a common perspective, but it felt fitting.
Final Words
Once We Flew is a well written Sci-Fi novella with a lot of interesting ideas, but it could have filled a lot more pages without issue.
Find Once We Flew on Goodreads.
A Puzzle of Poppies
By Renee Edwards
This novella is a reimagining of A Study in Scarlet, by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Thatโs not a story Iโve read, but Iโm vaguely aware the author wrote about some kind of detective (Sherlock Holmes), so itโs safe to say I had Expectations (note the capital E).
But, letโs not get ahead of ourselves.
The first part of the story is told in a series of letters. The writer (and the bookโs main character) is Dr. Wilfred A Jarvis, and he tells his sister about his experiences of the war in Afghanistan in 1880. It reads exactly like how I imagine a gentleman of the era would express himself in writing, and it perfectly sets the mood of the story.
However, the first part is quickly over, and thatโs when the โrealโ story begins. Hereโs where the fae are introduced, including the half-fae master of perception and deduction, miss Honoria Sherwood. Then, thereโs a murder.
This part of the book is written in much the same style as the first, but rather than letters, theyโre told through diary entries. These entries are significantly longer than the letters in the first part, and contain much more detail. Unfortunately, this somewhat lessens the sense that the text is written by a Victorian-era gentleman, but it also brings the reader deeper into the story. Itโs a trade off, but I suspect itโs for the better. After all, I very much enjoyed the book.
What I Didnโt Like
Iโve not read the story that this book is based on, so I canโt say how close it is. However, I felt like the mystery-solving aspect of the story was a bit underwhelming. Miss Sherwood is clearly a genius, but we mostly see the results of her efforts, and not as much of her process and reasoning.
Again, maybe thatโs true to the original, but as a consequence Iโm not as impressed by Miss Sherwoodโs cleverness as I wanted to be.
What I Liked
Much as I said the Victorian-era style decreased in the second part of the book, itโs still present, and itโs enhanced by the behaviour, speech, and attitude of the character in the story. Admittedly, I donโt recall reading much, if any, literature written during that time period, but the narration still feels just right.
By contrast, the world building feels modern and fresh. The fae, who prefer to be referred to as โthe folkโ have reconnected with the human world after some time of absence, and an embassy has been established on an island just off the coast of England. Relationship between folk and humans are strained, and within Queen Mabโs court, different factions vie for power.
Within the story, Dr. Jarvis represents traditional, gentlemanly sensibilities, while Miss Sherwood plays the role of the rebel who overthrows conventions and questions the established order. This could have turned into slapstick, but the author manages to keep it real, and it becomes a natural part of the story.
Final Words
A puzzle of poppies is an excellent reimagining of the first Sherlock Holmes story, with fairies.
Find A Puzzle of Poppies on Goodreads.
Blackburn Station
By Karen Lucia
I donโt believe in perfection, but Blackburn Station is a novella that challenges that belief. The story is focused, to the point, and engaging. I finished it in a single sitting, in just a few hours, without ever coming up for air.
We get one character, who faces one problem, and nothing in the story detracts from that.
Everything that happens and everything thatโs mentioned serves to move Janeโs story forward. Jane, whoโs the sole survivor of the destruction of Blackburn, a space station on the edge of civilisation. Jane, whoโs lost everything. Her family, her friends, her home. Her lifetime of research and her very connection to the world.
Jane, who slowly, almost reluctantly, begins to claw her way back to life.
Itโs fascinating how close you can get to a character and their world in just a few pages when the author does everything right. Blackburn Station doesnโt try to impress with deep world building or interesting character quirks, and instead focus on what matters: Jane, and what sheโs facing.
In so doing, the world we see through Janeโs eyes becomes all the more believable, and her problem all the more relatable.
What I Didnโt Like
Nothing
What I Liked
Everything
Final Words
Blackburn station is as close to perfect a novella as Iโve ever read.